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#1 vladan

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Posted 26 September 2009 - 11:10

Kao sto sam i napisao, tekst sasvim opravdano trpi kritiku; neka se sada poznavaoci engleskog jezika iskazu ovde.


Veceras sam clanu parlamenta, koji zastupa podrucje gde ja zivim i predstavlja mog poslanika, uputio sledece pismo (uklonjeni su samo licni detalji koji mene identifikuju):

To: Mr George Galloway
MP for Tower Hamlets, London

Dear Mr. Galloway,

Being the member of your constituency I wish to direct your attention on one particular problem:

In Belgrade, Republic of Serbia, The Pride Parade has to be cancelled less than 24 hours before the time the Parade was due.

Parade was cancelled because Serbian state was unable to provide security to the Parade, which was threatened by hooligans and clerofascistic groups, which are closed to the Serbian establishment and freely tolerated by them. It must be accepted that this groups express majority attitude in Serbia.

In this situation, I wish to point very clearly that the general attitude in Serbia, including the establishment, is against basic civil rights, and absolutely unready to joint European Union.

As a member of your constituency, I am expecting from you to do everything possible to stop Serbia joining EU, at least, for a time being.

Yours faithfully,

Dr Vladan
Specialist Neurosurgeon

London,



#2 eagles

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Posted 26 September 2009 - 15:07

Mislim da pismo nije tako lose napisno za nekog kome je engleski strani jezik. To je to sto se tice lingvistike i gramatike, o sadrzini pisma drugom prilikom.

#3 DJ_Vasa

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Posted 26 September 2009 - 19:24

Upozorenje:

Ko se bude bavio politikom, Vladanovom ličnošću, lovom na izdajnike, veštice i ostalo, dobiće topic na Prison Breaku.


Obrisano je nekoliko bljuvotina, ali i odgovora dobronamernih forumaša.

P.S. Uroš je uglavnom dobro ispravio pismo, a ispravke se nalaze u spojleru, ovde. Pogledaj njegov post i klikni spojler.

Edited by DJ_Vasa, 26 September 2009 - 19:29.